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mrcheapyasui · 11-02-2009, 12:03 AM

Haha thats awesome! I showed the mask to my cat, and he hissed at it, so I took that as a good sign!

Chris_Keaton · 11-02-2009, 05:29 AM

This was funny and sad all in 6 minutes. Poor pig thing.

Charli · 11-02-2009, 09:37 AM

I liked the "drawing-to-life" concept, I wished you had used a real Artist charcoal pencil instead of a regular pencil, that's just me.

It was hokey by all accounts and when the girl screamed I could swear she was smiling - lol.

Edgen · 11-02-2009, 10:31 AM

I wish the pig mask wasn't a pig mask. Or if it had been removed, perhaps we could see another monster. But, since the mask was definitely a mask, I wish you guys took a bit of time to at least hide that it was a mask. or perhaps find some hoofs. For some reason walking bags of pork scare me.

Thanks for entering and looking forward to the next entry!
/j

EditPhish · 11-02-2009, 10:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Charli

I liked the "drawing-to-life" concept, I wished you had used a real Artist charcoal pencil instead of a regular pencil, that's just me.

Actually, that's a good point Charli, and one I meant to make as well... it was hard to see the actual drawings because of the pencil. A charcoal pencil would have helped this quite a bit.

Michael Anthony Horrigan · 11-02-2009, 04:11 PM

Well, lots to take from this and move forward in the next fest.
Try and keep some continuity in your scenes. Sound is also important. Try and clean it up a bit, it can be done. Put some background sound in.

Get more coverage and plan out some of your shots.

The pig guy was actually kind of creepy. Keep at it and you will improve.

Take care,

Mike

Vergilus · 11-03-2009, 11:04 PM

I'm glad everyone enjoyed the piggy

REHov520 · 11-04-2009, 10:25 PM

despite the technical shortcomings, i laughed more at this one than any other entry. and for that good job!

Dauntless · 11-07-2009, 12:40 AM

I like the twist at the end, that was nice.... One question I think when the pig kills the guy you can see what looks like a camera in the background?...not sure there is smoke, hehe.

Darkline · 11-07-2009, 05:19 AM

I haven't read any of the comments but if you meant this to be funny you did a really really good job.

If you didn't, then you still did a really good job because we had a lot of fun watching this anyway.

thanks for showing.

11-02-2009, 12:03 AM	#11
mrcheapyasui Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: San Luis Obispo, San Francisco Posts: 30	Haha thats awesome! I showed the mask to my cat, and he hissed at it, so I took that as a good sign! __________________ The Drawing of Doom <- MonsterFest!!!

11-02-2009, 05:29 AM	#12
Chris_Keaton Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Tucson, AZ Posts: 970	This was funny and sad all in 6 minutes. Poor pig thing. __________________ Chris Keaton - Writer \| Website \| Email \| Facebook \| imdb Suspense ScriptFest VII: A Clockwork Darkened (Top 3) Betrayal ScriptFest VI: Educated Mouse Trap Monster ScriptFest V: In The Family (Top 5) Western ScriptFest IV: Slave Moon (Top 10) Pulp ScriptFest III: Lovecraft (Top 5)

11-02-2009, 09:37 AM	#13
Charli cool little "title" Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Freakin' Desert Posts: 2,746	I liked the "drawing-to-life" concept, I wished you had used a real Artist charcoal pencil instead of a regular pencil, that's just me. It was hokey by all accounts and when the girl screamed I could swear she was smiling - lol. __________________ FACEBOOK

11-02-2009, 10:31 AM	#14
Edgen Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Lost Angels, CA \| Austin, TX Posts: 1,628	I wish the pig mask wasn't a pig mask. Or if it had been removed, perhaps we could see another monster. But, since the mask was definitely a mask, I wish you guys took a bit of time to at least hide that it was a mask. or perhaps find some hoofs. For some reason walking bags of pork scare me. Thanks for entering and looking forward to the next entry! /j __________________ justin r. durban - yup & yup.

11-02-2009, 04:11 PM	#16
Michael Anthony Horrigan More Cowbell Pictures Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Ottawa Posts: 7,872	Well, lots to take from this and move forward in the next fest. Try and keep some continuity in your scenes. Sound is also important. Try and clean it up a bit, it can be done. Put some background sound in. Get more coverage and plan out some of your shots. The pig guy was actually kind of creepy. Keep at it and you will improve. Take care, Mike __________________ Six Time DVXFEST finalist willing to write scripts for THRILLFEST MONSTERFEST : 4th Place - Sustained Excellence Award - WESTFEST: 3rd Place

11-03-2009, 11:04 PM	#17
Vergilus Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 1	I'm glad everyone enjoyed the piggy

11-04-2009, 10:25 PM	#18
REHov520 Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles, CA Posts: 146	despite the technical shortcomings, i laughed more at this one than any other entry. and for that good job! __________________ www.ariehovenkamp.com

11-07-2009, 12:40 AM	#19
Dauntless Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 51	I like the twist at the end, that was nice.... One question I think when the pig kills the guy you can see what looks like a camera in the background?...not sure there is smoke, hehe.

11-07-2009, 05:19 AM	#20
Darkline Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Watford, UK Posts: 805	I haven't read any of the comments but if you meant this to be funny you did a really really good job. If you didn't, then you still did a really good job because we had a lot of fun watching this anyway. thanks for showing.

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